She walks through the door startling him, he looks up. For a while they stare at each other. Then she says, “You look tired, it looks like it’s been a busy day.” He replies, "Yeah..you have been busy too." Can you tell me what happened?
She replies, “Maybe someday...”
Then he asks her, "Did I lose you? Did I..?"
She walks up to him and hugs him. Then she answers, “I have known you all my life and even then I only knew half of you...the promise of you. But these past few months, you have fulfilled your promise. How could you ever lose me?
He tightly hugs her tears rolling down his eyes, he kisses her forehead.
31 comments:
Absolutely love this...a wonderful ending, one I have been searching for, with no success.
I love how you (don't) describe yourself
You
the now and the past
the first and the last
you are in
deep within
an everlasting flow
the one whom i know
you are here
as far as near
in my dreams
you are mine
in your dreams
i simply shine
only yours
i open my doors
for you to enter
and only you
is allowed in there
for you are always here,there..and
everywhere.
how much this one touched me darling..you never know just how beautiful you write!! a perfect masterpiece that i adore..my heart races in beats love..so special that piece is,love you and you certainly pulled my triggers right ;)
so loved this..he knows how dear he is,so precious to leave you and too precious for he is staying,forever and more..:)
tight hug darling
xoxo
Desert Rose
Lovely, Wild Rose. A fulfilled promise is a beautiful thing.
Urban Cowboy - My dear friend, you will get that perfect ending very soon and am delighted you're doing well lately :)
Hugs to you*
Space Cowgirl~
Desert Rose - Everything you just recited am with you in it and thank you for being here always darling :)
LarvK with this promise it means a sacrifice in all of him for you, and also us.
He's understanding and makes our lives anew.
Too sweet and so heartfelt to see his tears. You know how to make us feel deep sweetheart.
hugs & kisses
Galaxyhera
<3
Extra points for that passionate video at the end!
Gorgeous post, darling!
xoxox,
CC
and the beauty of "being told" and "knowing", leaving no doubt ~ sigh ~ you have said it perfectly here - just beautiful -
so sorry to have been away for a while - family medical emergency and am only now seeing the light of day a bit - but i did so miss coming by your place for such word-feasts!
Wild Rose
The comments here are interesting You know how to captivate and be an intriguing, and mysterious 'wild rose'.
Joanny
Amos - Hello and welcome, i guess am trying to leave a little mystery about me :)
Talon -A fulfilled promise is a beautiful thing indeed my dear.
Joanny - Thanks Joanny very kind of you~
Gypsywoman- So sorry to hear that all wasn't well and hope it all worked out eventually. Your visits are always appreciated dear~
Amanda Sablan - I know i put the videos so you can enjoy them x :)
Couture Carrie -Lovely to see you around doll and hope you'll keep coming, thank you xxo
Galaxyhera - I truly appreciate your friendship darling and your comments always put a huge smile on my face. Thank you Hera and lots love, hugs and kisses to you too xo
Beautiful! Made me tear up.
Hi,
I found you through the Blog Hop. I took a look around and thought that your blog is great! So I decided to follow you. Anyway, check out my blog as well: http://johnsmithbooks.blogspot.com/
Warmest regards,
John Smith
P.S. - Your post was very passionate and touching.
Talli -Am touched you felt that way next time you come i will have a box of tissues for you and me :)
John -Welcome and thank you for your comment and the follow! Sure will check your blog out :)
We feel complete when our loved ones assure us...I consider myself extremely lucky to know a soul like yours...love you.
Your Sun
hello again, lady! i just wanted to invite you and yours over to another of my blogs where i have some of my own little verses scattered around - at gypsywomanworld - so should you be inclined to visit, i would love to have you drop by and sit and browse a while till your heart's content - looking forward to seeing you again! have a great day!
Anonymous - You're so sweet and so kind for that anything you say is wonderful..love you too :)
Gypsywoman -Sure will check your other blog out when i get sometime :)
fabulous x
Beautiful...always, always drawn to the more romantic senses of writing, you do this so very well. :)
To leave or to stay? A promise of commitment in the face of mystery personified. I love this. :)
Betweenhearts75 - Thanks dear and yes am drawn to the romance and the wild at the same time :)
Kirstyb -Lovely to have you around thank you and stop by again x
Tony -Love in itself is a mystery and commitment..well that just strengthens it. Glad you loved it :)
What a lovely read!!! The ongoing process of discovery in your beloved... and with each discovery, you feel more and more happy about it... this piece seems to be in sync with my most recent poem... :) I love it when I read something that is in agreement with what I've just written!!
And I have just made it back, to read this tender delight. You write of the heart... so well. I have learned to recognize your words... your style... that is so yours... with the imprint of your heart. Thank you for leaving me the link... I missed much while I was away. Hugs, Wild Rose.
Nevine
Kavisionz - So good to know you have felt that way and written something in this line. Sweet to have you here as always my dear friend~
Nevine -My sweet delight your words always touch me deeply and to know you see me through my words as well makes me elated. I want to leave that imprint in you and my muse always my beautiful xo~
greetings,
I popped over from Brian's TUC site.
I love everything on your site and on the Desert Rose.
I especially liked this one though. The idea that love might endure...
citymom
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