Strutting my verve on these wireless waves,
flaunting my literary drinks, assimilating succulent dissertations,
wanting your doing words to feel my curves,
Teasing out all manner of fascination and enthrallment.
Sucking your bookish toplip with my words my Space Cowboy,
You, tasting of punctuation and unfinished sentences, allure!
Slowing down love, as you delicately drink the intoxication of my syntax,
feeling my word licks through your Wifi space; iPad, iMac, Nokia, Kindle,
steering your gravity towards sublime expression.
Watching me as I slowly strip off the formula of what rhymes in you,
flowing only in pure hardcore with no meter.
I am so grammatically undressed as I feel your holographic 3D image
around and within me, loving this feeling of allegorical nakedness.
Lying with me in a bed of supple supposition,
phrasing your desires in my mind,
pushing towards the opening number.
There are no shy abbreviations between us,
you’re in me as am blooming in your every era,
daring yourself to be my body scribe,
printing me in your soul forever.
Touching the inside of my declaration,
writing your bounteous words along my hips,
while feeling our hot groove of sultry alliteration,
reading aloud the mutual arousal of this written chorus.
Loving me in my sonnets,
Me, understanding all of your composition,
There’re no word limits to us,
No censored feelings.
I am unadulterated and unedited,
I am your prose,
you complete me with your aspirations while
penning me with your satisfactory sigh.
You’re my written muse needing to be read,
baby, we have come a long way.
Submitted to One Shot Wednesday .
31 comments:
LarvK, this one is beyond description for me, these lines are so deep and full of emotion.
"Sucking your bookish toplip with my words my Space Cowboy,
You, tasting of punctuation and unfinished sentences, allure!
Slowing down love, as you delicately drink the intoxication of my syntax,"
I'm amazed every time when i read you, this is too good. So much love in it. Thanxs for sharing it. I don't have enough words to describe it sweetie.
verbal signs
electrical strategies
on my sweating lines
you melt in my fantasies
too many wireless data
my volcano erupted lava
dancing on our sheet
melting the ice on your feet
I am around
in your iPad, Nokia, Kindle,
steering your gravity towards sublime
expression.
i am in your infinite
exploding yet exquisite
let me be one more tonguing force
that will run on you as fast as the wildest horse,
then i will slow down
when your eyes dare me to go on
Me,you..we rewrite the history
on our screaming skin
too busy with these wireless facts
we had to remember Marconi with a loud laugh
yes baby,it is a long way we come.
loved that one larvy,too sensual and arousing..you bet i had my own imagination,floating on with this electrical force..ha ha,darling you are extremely within so just ENJOY ;)
your wild desert rose..:)
This was delightful from beginning to end. There are so many great lines that linger:
"You, tasting of punctuation and unfinished sentences, allure!"
"Lying with me in a bed of supple supposition,
phrasing your desires in my mind,"
Beautiful, Wild Rose.
Oh, those wiley muses! They play with our feelings so!!! And there was a light hint of the erotic in there... almost like making love with the muse... well, not almost, really. What a delight... what a fantasy! You do so inspire, my dear.
A most enjoyable read, Wild Rose!
Nevine
Wow, I never thought technology could be so sexy!
you are a gutsy writer. you stuck with that theme and wouldn't let go. i was wondering how you were gonna end it and you ended it with a cool boom. i liked it a lot.
Galaxyhera: Am glad you enjoyed it sweetheart~
Desert Rose: What can i say queen i always love your finishing colors. Kiss~
Talli: I never thought technology and muses would turn me on so much either :)
Talon: Thank you sweety, always a pleasure to read your thoughts~
Ed Pilolla: I wasn't sure how i was going to end it either when i started till i just did. Thank you for the sweet compliment.
Nevine Dear,
These muses of ours do wonders to us and i was making love to my muse and we both were ecstatic about it. For that it wouldn't be so bad to thank him...so thank you muse ~:)
Thank you Nevine for enjoying this piece~
Wow, that was really cool! Different from other poetry I've read. So many lines will remain stuck in my head. :]
Very sexy Wild Rose...you definitely intrigue me.
Hey Urban Cowboy and Amanda thanks for your comments saw them in my email but for some reason they don't seem to appear here after i published them. Don't know why but bear with me maybe blogger has some answers to this issue. Really hating it so far has anyone had this problem before?
What I loved the most about this poem was the mix of the romantic with modern gadgets. Marvellous. Many thanks.
Greetings from London.
Brilliant. Just brilliant!! Loved it!
Urban Cowboy: Thanks again officially now that blogger seems back to normal and glad to know i intrigue you :)
Amanda Sablan: Your comments are very much appreciated.
A Cuban in London: welcome and thanks.
Anything Fits A Naked Lady: Love seeing you around :)
I Love You darling is all am able to say.
Your Sun-
Ooooooh that is so sweet and endearing Anonymous...Love you too. Thanks for the sweet comments always ~:)
i dont know if i have ever wanted to read and write so bad in my life...oh that was so delicious...wonderufl write...thanks for linkingup with one shot...
frightened to comment in case i lead you on...that was a hot, steamy piece..thanks for sharing with One shot..cheers Pete
Rush in wanton limitless lines
Galaxies lost through space and time
Emotional rush to light that blinds
Unleashing rapturous words sublime
Sesquipidalian rose blush salient
Channel through a muse unchained
In faction, tattered, to core refrain
Banished, sunk, dread coral haze
Finding peace through living days
Cheers. Keep on inspiring!
Pete - Thank you and don't be afraid don't worry about me being led on haha...that's a done part my muse took care of that~
Brian - Your comments always make laugh with a smile at the end and happy to make you want to write more~
Dustus - Wonderful wonderful lines that you just shared with me loved and I loved reading them thank you~
Strutting my verve on these wireless waves,
flaunting my literary drinks, assimilating succulent dissertations,
wanting your doing words to feel my curves,
Teasing out all manner of fascination and enthrallment.
Sucking your bookish toplip with my words my Space Cowboy,
You, tasting of punctuation and unfinished sentences, allure!
Slowing down love, as you delicately drink the intoxication of my syntax,
feeling my word licks through your Wifi space; iPad, iMac, Nokia, Kindle,
steering your gravity towards sublime expression.
fantastic lines. extremely well crafted
Oooohhh.. It was too sensuous to think of it as anything geeky! A fantastic wordplay here.. :)
thoroughly enjoyed reading this one.. The imagery was so vivid that I didn't really have to imagine anything .. except the subject ofcourse ;-)
A wicked piece! A neeeaatt One Shot!
that muse of yours must be really something..you're writing is a wonder of prolific passion!
Mory - Good to have you around and many thanks.
Kavisionz - Welcome and thank you so much for for that beautiful compliment, really glad you felt it without having to imagine it :)
Soundoffreedom - Your visit is very much appreciated and in simple words i can't totally describe my muse and what he means to me except that he's is my pure love, passion, desire, family and everything else in between and i adore him beyond words ~:)
I love it. Feels like it just tumbled out, yet there's not a spare word or false not. Hotly passionate and cool at the same time. Good work! (Here from One Shot Wednesday)
JamieDedes - Thanks and i appreciate you stopping by~
love it!
Wild Rose, I loved re-visiting this sensuous and beautiful poem again! :)
What a delight from beginning to end!! You know how to take us on a fantasy...loved it so! Thanks for linking with Potluck dear one!! Your'e just awesome!! Hugs xx
Amazing how you eroticized writing. So well done. Congrats on a unique poem. (I wish I'd written it!)
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