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Tuesday, October 5, 2010

"My Adonis"


You stand before me
Handsome as always,
My Adonis
Sculpted from my love,
My dreams and desires.
I am astounded at how still you can be
As my eyes drink your flawless pose
Rock hard granite perfection.
Silky raven hair falling
No...
Hanging above a placid
Forehead unrifled yet by age
A Masterpiece!
Gem colored eyes
Varying hue by the hour
Or reset by the mood
Cat's Eye Topaz
Malachite chartreuse
Complimenting
Fleshy lips flawlessly placed
Begging to be bitten...
To be consumed...
On an angular face
As if chiseled after an image of Eros
Erogenous neck line luring the eye
Down to your broad shoulders
Arms outlined in muscles
Defined and secure
Like a horse in gallop

Tag Heuer resting on your wrist
Interrupting the flow
To your hand
Harboring virile fingers
Painting, gliding and gripping
A pen, a phone, a brush,
My soft supple skin...
Your torso inebriating
Your well drawn back
A heavenly sea to rest upon
A pirate
plundering hearts
Wherever you may sail.

I met you long ago
Needing someone to dream of
When bored and to speak to
When lonely
To cry to and hold
When nights failed
To draw me into slumber

Now always together...

I have spoken to you
Of Love, Fears, Dreams
I have read your poetic words
Contemplating all of life
Your melodious soft voice
Stretches itself over the extension
Whispering magical words
Lulled with a sultry accent
Airing comforting phrases
These memories and time spent
With a man that is more than a rainy-day’s comfort
And a fleece blanket covering
My naked feet.

Softly...
Like a whispered caress
I edge closer
To your wanting pedestal
I possess you
My one-piece collection,
Frozen forever in this moment
My hands move-rushing to
Polish you into refined elegance
Kissing your eyes,
Your dimple,
Your nose.
Caressing your face,
Your chest,
Your thighs.
I kneel before you
My Vampire Knight...
Smoothing you until you glisten
I come apart at the ends of
Your soft fingertips...
And before I am finished
I slowly run my lips
From the apex to the base
Of our passionate craving
Entangled in sweat and tears
Unafraid of tomorrow’s fears
Ecstatic to the moment’s oblivion

For every question
You hold in your heart
I answer
I am yours.


61 comments:

Ben Langhinrchs said...

Hot and steamy and sensuous. I must admit, it is a funny juxtaposition with the poem just before yours on the One Shot Wednesday list, Not Your Average Love Poem. One of the fun things about One Shot Wednesday is seeing them together.

Brian Miller said...

and that would be just the answer i was looking for...smiles. hot and steamy...and nicely played...great one shot!

KB said...

Hot stuff!

PattiKen said...

I had to chuckle at Ben's comment, and at the coincidence that our poems are in sequence on One Shot. Yours is so passionate, and mine is so...

I love this:

For every question
You hold in your heart
I answer
I am yours.

That stanza is magical.

TALON said...

Wow, Wild Rose! I think I need a cool shower now or maybe I'll just go up to bed and snuggle in against my own Adonis! :) You write passion so beautifully!

Galaxyhera said...

OMG LarvK where you have gotten that image? Sooo HOT! Wish i was the fish swimming between his legs, can i please join in with you pleaaaaaaaaaaase? ;) You've burned me with this one now dreaming and yearning. Love you and him.

Love, Hugs & Million kisses,
Hera

Amanda said...

Extemely hot, sensual and oh so steamy ...you amaze me girlfriend, this is such a cool place to visit and you are so very creative!! Great One Shot!!

dustus said...

Steamy to say the least! Your lines are scorching for your Adonis. Always a pleasure to read your work, LarvK

Shashi said...

As you are so focussed on some one you have met and dream about day and night.. its a beautiful ode to him.. I loved reading it all the way and enjoyed it throughout....

ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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lukepraterswordsalad said...

I need a cold shower.. in liquid nitrogen.. excuse me..

Luke @ WordSalad

willow said...

Oooo-la-la!!! Which reminds me, I need to get a battery for my Tag!

Sir Thomas said...

the fire of this passion...

wants to consume my soul...

RiikaInfinityy said...

sizzling:D wonderfully written!=D

steveroni said...

Do you mean that you REJECTED my comment? I do not understand--unless I was rude to you. I don't keep a copy of my own commenting, so I cannot check back.

But sometimes I DO get carried away in criticism--bad character trait.

BTW, I HAVE been to your blog before, and like it very VERY much. Your words are marvelously painting mental pictures. (They always say 'your imagery is great'!) Sorry if that was not conveyed to you.

And I love the vids, just a 'time thing'...OK? Please, please do not misunderstand.

That's only the third time in two-and-half years that a comment I wrote was rejected. I really REEELY hope there are no hard feelings.

This comment is my amend. Hopefully you'll accept that.

betweenhearts75 said...

This is really well done. In this I see so much more in it than just the passion, I see such an intimate level of love throughout, beyond the "warmth of fleece" ~Wonderfully written as always. Which still brings to mind you should have an anthology of your work in a book!!!! Incredible talent dear friend. ~April

willow said...

Sorry to be so enigmatic...my watch battery...you know, Tag Heuer!

signed...bkm said...

passioniate piece of writing - bkm

Shashi said...

Dear Wild Rose...

Thanks for liking the "Unconditional love" at my blog and thought of posting the reply to your message there, here too in case you are not able to log on to the blog again sometime soon...

Yes I have enjoyed my various forays into your world of love... and longing and passion at your blog.. its beautiful world. I enjoy my each visit.

Yes I agree your world is full of different colors and styles and thoughts... I enjoy them on both forms of the world... blog and twitter...

thanks for being here...

ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya

Claudia said...

oh la la - think i need some fresh air...steamy one shot!

Anonymous said...

Your Adonis is a lucky guy...you love him unconditionally and your soul resonates with his...Thank you for sharing your love for him Larvee!

Your Sun

Nevine said...

Dearest Wild Rose, there's so much here, I don't know where to start. Let me just start at the end, first, and say: You are a mistress of erotic writing. You paint such delectable images... and they are truly universal. No matter the subject of the poem... they ring inside my heart.

As for personal favorite lines: your last four. Is there a more beautiful personification of love?

Feeling warm and wonderful... I thank you for sharing this treasure, my dear!

Warm hugs and kisses,
Nevine

Amanda Sablan said...

HOT. I am on fire right now and loving every minute of it. Super sexy pictures too, especially that first one, which was surprising... <3

Sangu said...

Ha I see you're a Shah Rukh fan. I never saw the attraction, to be honest, but he's a lot of fun to watch in interviews!

Talli Roland said...

Beautiful words, as always! Thank you.

liv2write2day said...

Passionate fantasy. Adonis is a myth, right? But nice to imagine. However, when you really love someone he becomes like Adonis.
Great description.

emily wierenga said...

very romantic.

Caribbean Fool said...

Saw your comment on my blog and had to check out your work. Very sensual poem. You have a gift of working with archetypes and manipulating them into a fascinating symbolic image. Enjoyed the poem, thanks for posting it on 1SW.

crb.

jason evans said...

Feasting from the eyes is an energy that never fades. One of the most free and wonderful engines of the energies of passion.

Vampire knight...an alchemy of grace and darkness.

joanny said...

Wild Rose:

Artistic, sensual, flawless! so much more then steamy---there is a strength and power of a raw passionate nature unbridled but never lewd or obscene, always from a good place. Speaks love fire and passion.

That is why I adore your writing.

Warm hugs,
Joanny

Samantha Vérant said...

Lovely. Passionate. HOT. HOT. HOT. Lyrical.

Francine said...

Hi,

Sorry I haven't dropped by lately!

Damn blogfests (addicted)have been back-to-back recently and some take a little more thought than others.

That said, I'm glad I came by today. As always you paint pictures with words: exuding sensuality in prose. I loved this, it's so hot and captures the moment, what with Stepanie Meyer's Twilight, New Moon and Eclipse out there temptingly dark! Though I must say Chloe Saunder's The Summoning, Blue Bloods and Marked are worth reading, too.

best
F

Tara said...

Beautiful and sexy. Great stuff.

Steve said...

Steamy, mood-suffusive stuff. Excellent line-breaks, word choices, as usual.

Mr Monkey said...

Thanks for stopping by my blog - I'm following you, hope you follow me now. Cheers
Mr Monkey

Anonymous said...

Well If that's your Adonis you are Aphrodite! Cheers and a fab. writing there dear Larv! Thank you sweet Galaxyhera for ur wishes:)

Desert Rose said...

Out of my eternal myth
you rise
pillared in my existence
adorned with my signs
as i am carved
encrypted
on your skin
bumping in your veins
a secret of life
your twirling pulse
beat in my heart
as i lay painted
in your arms
sculpted
in your sanctuary
your celestial priestess
of love

I reread this beautiful piece of yours many times darling, before i could humbly try to find suitable words to fit in its brilliance, but yet i still am so short
i love how we both are enjoying his exotic anatomy Queen..our hearts beat in his, forever and more..:)
tight hugs darling
xoxoxo

CityMom2 said...

Rose,
Too weird. I was here the other night in fact you and figures/nuances from the Adonis were in my dreams...still trying to grasp what it was.

Loved this work. Off to big city to head up a family intervention. May all the Gods and Goddesses be with me as I tackle the criminally insane.
Soon,
Citymom

Scribblers Inc said...

Quite an SRK fan I see! I interviewed him over an year ago for radio...lives up to his name for sure! :)

wishes
Scribblers Inc.

P.S.- the poetry is magical...

Betty Manousos @ CUT AND DRY said...

Loved that passionate poem, a tribute
to a haunting, desperate, everlasting journey inside one's body/mind.

It would be fascinating if all of us could find our "Adonis".
Another great poem of yours, Wild Rose.

Happy Monday!

B xx

Jingle said...

heartfelt and sweet.

Wild Rose said...

Ben -Thanks i read it and i liked :)

Brian -I love that answer too

KB -Thanks

Pattiken - Those lines were my favorite lines as well and i liked your poem too dear.

Talon - Hope you enjoyed snuggling next to your Adonis sweetheart and am sure he loved it :) xo

Galaxyhera - You're just too beautiful in and out muah

Amanda - Thank you girlfriend!

Dustus - Thanks

Shashi - Thank you, i like your thoughts too.

Luke - Haha..you made made me laugh hard and i do hope the liquid nitrogen was as fulfilling my friend :)

Willow -Ah.. you know it and fix that tag soon.

Sir Thomas - Let it consume you :)

Riikafinnity - Thanks

Steveroni - Okay i did accept it, no worries :)

Betweenheart34 - Will definitely consider that sweetie, thanks for the support much appreciated xo

Signed...bkm - Thank you dear

Claudia -Thanks!

Amanda Sablan - You know i felt just like that when i posted it, so glad you enjoyed it my dear xox

Sangu - Thanks at least you like something he does.

Talli - Thanks beautiful!

Samantha- Hot it is :)

liv2write2day - Yes our loved ones do become like Adonis because we love them that much.

Caribbean - Liked yours too and i appreciate your visits.

Steve - Glad you made it and you know it :)

Tara - Thanks for stopping by and commenting.

Mr. Monkey guy - Sure

Wild Rose said...

Emily -Glad you enjoyed it sweetie.

Jason - That Vampire vampire Knight is just that..more than the alchemy and grace, thank you!

Joanny - Really good to hear that you enjoy my words and adore them, am humbled thank you dear xo

Francine - I know how those blog-fests can be but happy you made it. Will stick with the Chloe Saunder's The Summoning and Blue Bloods, thank you.

Citymom2 - Thanks for having some wild dreams about me haha..i hope you dream about it again so you can grasp what it was about :) xo

Scribblers Inc. - I know SRK never disappoints and i also stopped by your blog and your writing is wonderful, thank you for visiting.

Betty - Thank you so much sweetheart xo

Wild Rose said...

Nevine - My sweetest delight you know how to warm me up so well inside thank you darling xo

Wild Rose said...

Anonymous - Thank you from deep down you're just too sweet muah xox

Wild Rose said...

Anonymous/ Your Sun - You're the sweetest person i have ever known and so loving and kind, you humble me. Thank you darling muah xoxo

Sara said...

Don't ask me why, but this reminds me of a time when I was teen and I clipped this picture into my diary of a guy I had big crush on at school. I would dream about him and he was the "perfect" guy. I could say anything to him, even though I don't think I ever said a single word to him in real life. Such are the wonders of fantasy:~)

I agree with Talon...no one does passion better than you:~)

Jannie Funster said...

Wow, on the subway! :)

Lovely site. I especially like your stain-glass window background. Gives an wonderful feel.

xo

Wild Rose said...

Sara - So humbled with your words, thanks you really x :)

Jannie - Glad to see you around and welcome.

Couture Carrie said...

So sultry, darling!
Love it!

xoxox,
CC

Jingle said...

wild and beautiful at the same time.
love your work.

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/23/6244/

Thanks a lot for the support to Jingle Poetry Potluck, I could not always find time to show how much we appreciate your support, here, three awards for you, hope to see you in of week 7, our theme is love and romance. Happy Monday, Happy Blogging! xxx

Sara said...

Just stopped by to say "hi." I hope all is well with you:~)

rancour said...

my gf loves that Gaga song...she can't stop playing it! and i admit her music does kind of grow on u, dont u think?

Terry Stonecrop said...

Oh yum! He is an Adonis. Love your taste, and of course, your beautiful, passionate poetry:) Wonderful as always.

Great choice of pix, too, again, as always.

Amanda Sablan said...

I'm missing you and your wonderful poetry. Hope you're doing well.

GYPSYWOMAN said...

should i be able to think of adjectives/superlatives other than those already dedicated to this wonderful piece, i should put them here - but, i am without possibilities for this magnificent verse!

Jingle Poetry said...

welcome linking in a poem to our potluck today, Thanks in advance!

http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-potluck-buildings-landmarks-and.html

an award will be given upon participation this week.

hope you well, friend,
miss you in our spot.

Kavita said...

Good God, woman... you really ADORE SRK..don't you!??!?! :) This was one hot piece... I am sure he would be flattered reading this!! Tweet him this poem, and I am telling you, he will be blushing like crazy! :)
Being an Indian myself, I have a fairly decent idea of his immense fan following! But you, in my circle of friends, you top the chart! :) Now, being in the US, I only get to hear of him from mom :)

Anyway, I have been missing you so much, girl... I hope all is well with you... do email me or something.. I am really looking forward to seeing some sorta communication from you..

Take care, darling... and much love..
~Kavita

Jingle Poetry said...

Here is the end of the year awards 4 you, enjoy!

End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

Your support has been a delight to us, at this time of the year, We wish you all the best !

Link a poem to our potluck today, We send blessings all the way to brighten your day!

Nevine said...

Dear Wild Rose,

I just found myself thinking about you, today. I hope you are doing well. And may your holiday season be filled with stars. Keep safe... and take care.

Love and hugs,
Nevine

Wild Rose said...

Thank you everyone for all your beautiful comments. Happy New Year to all and may all your dreams and resolutions be realized.

Nevine - Missed you too my sweet delight as well as Amanda, Kavita and Talon and all of you.

@LarvK~

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